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Well it’s good, the word choice is not great but it has poetical, I think you should continue with the story. It sounds a little broad like I guess not ...

The beginning is great it gives a folk tale type feeling, it’s written in a great way. The story is a little vague, but I got most of it, the ...

It a good start, feels a little surreal, but it grabbed me I do think you should continue. It grabbed me, I do wonder though, are there only female characters. ...

This i a hilarious story, it’s kind of cynical in a way but impossible to take this seriously, it’s got bad word chose but it’s great, its written in a ...

It’s a good story, but the word choice is not great. It snowed just recently on my property, and my dog, Jessica, acts similar to the way the dog in ...